So someone made a good point in a critique of the very first chapter of the 13th House. They said, "Your protagonist is very put together and cool. I wonder how she's going to develop over the course of the story."
And I thought, "SHIT! She's not!"
Well, I guess she could turn into some super awesome mega-cool person, but I don't think I want that.
So now I need to come up with a way to make her flawed without taking too much away. I don't want to make her a coward, or a bitch, or something like that, not right off the bat. That would be weaksauce.
I think I've got a solution, but it IS late, and I AM functioning mostly on cookies right now. I think I'm going to go to bed and let this marinate, then come back tomorrow and see if it still sounds good.
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Sleep!
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